Hi it's Jayden. I have been working on the orange learning arrow and my goal for term 1 is following up feedback and feedforward after talking with my teacher. In my writing I have followed up feedback to improve my swimming recount. I have also improved my collage flag after following feedback.
Monday, April 6, 2009
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Yes Jayden you tried to follow the feedback I gave you and read your recount to make changes. I also enjoyed working with you on your flag as you were trying to make your object stand out against the background. Keep it up - it's wonderful to see you working at your learning.
Mrs Trembath
Thank you i enjoyed working on my flag!
Jayden
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